Blog 14

My goals to revising this essay is to make it flow more in a way to better incorporate the sources. I feel like it was extremely difficult to follow and I feel like making it true to who I am along with integrating the other sources will be really helpful to me. The steps I plan to achieve in this paper are first to figure out the flow of the paper. Next, I plan to conquer the use of the missing source which is the narrative project. Finally, I want to make sure I make it personal, but still grammatically correct. What I see is my biggest challenge is making the whole paper flow nicely without getting too off topic. I feel like I have important matters to discuss, however, it can be challenging to explain it in a way that is simple for readers to understand. I also find it challenging to be more specific. If a challenge is too difficult for me to solve on my own, I will have someone peer review it to get some extra help. I also plan to use the tutoring at the school along with having my last resort of asking my professor for advise. However, for this essay, peer review is the most valuable.